Using the paragraph below, how could i rework it making thestatement a proper introduction and literature review? I mustinclude participants, instruments, procedure, and ethical issuesand how to solve them. I thought i had included some of thosethings, but according to my grade i did not include any.
According to the five-factor model, Introversion andExtraversion form two extremes of the first
factor. This factor is scaled based on the person’s sociability,aggressiveness and emotional
expression. Depending on these measures, an introvertedindividual might be classified because they tend to lean moretowards being quiet,
reserved and withdrawn. Similarly, an extroverted individualwould lean towards being outgoing,
sociable and seeking adventure. Even in the MBTI scale,introversion and extraversion are the
first of the four markers that might determine an individual’spersonality. Although it might seem like a good idea to predict thesuccess of a marriage
based on an individual’s level of sociability and their comfortlevel with outdoor activities, it is
essential to remember that these markers are not an “all†or“nothing†situation. These are simply scales where an individualmight have different
levels of sociability. For instance, one might find anextroverted individual who likes a good house party but hates thecrowds at a concert. Also, there might be introverted individualswho
enjoy spending time with their close-knit friends but dislikespending time with people that they do not share a comfort levelwith. Here in lies the null hypothesis. Since these measuresare
not absolute, the prediction based on these measures cannot be“either-or,†where a couple either gets divorced or stays together.Just like the mood to be social is intermittent, depending
on the mood, the day and other factors, the level of maritalbliss is just as irregular. However, the synergetic effect betweensociability and marital bliss would also depend on whether both
the members are of the same personality type. The best number ofparticipants would be at least 15 couples of different sexualorientations but in equal amount. For instance, 5 straight
couples, 5 homosexual male couples, 5 homosexual female coupleswith each having different sociability level. The proper hypothesiswould be to judge whether couples with the same
sociability marker have more marital bliss or couples withopposing sociability markers. I believe this covers theintroduction as well as the literature review.
