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Growing up my favorite vacations would always be to go camping.Because Camping is one of my all-time favorite things to do andstill is to this day and I don’t think that will ever change. Whilecamping, I love going on walks and seeing the beauty of the worldaround us that you normal don’t see in the everyday world. I reallylove the fresh air and smell of the pine trees and campfires. Ilove sitting around the campfire at night, smelling the burningwood, staring at the bright fire, looking up and being able to seeall the bright stars in the dark sky, the stars you can’t seem tosee and really enjoy in the city with all the different lights. Ilove the sounds you hear, the fire, people laughing and enjoyingtheir families or just the complete silence away from the everydayworld we live in. Camping is a very relaxing and peaceful. It canget you away from most things like technology. I also give you timeto get physical activity in the fresh air. I love all theactivities you can do while camping like swimming, fishing,canoeing, boating, boating was always some much fun and my favoritepart was tubing. Having the water hit your face while spendingthrough the water. Also, you can play board games and watchingmovies or just have family time when it’s raining outside.Vacations to the lake are like an escape from the outside world,and a chance to see nature and still have fun. My vacations to thelake will always remain memorable and special. I hope that one dayI will be able to continue the tradition with my own family.