please type it. . We need to work on your sentencestructures and how many ideas are in 1 sentence. Also, there aresome phrasing issues but this is okay for now. You have ideas butthey need to be written a bit more academically. For example, Ineed a thesis statement in the introduction. I need clear topicsentences. Try not to write as if you are talking, in the presentmoment. The conclusion should be a summary of what you justproposed on how they will make a contract and have some positiveinfo, which you do have already. I just need to see more of anacademic structure.

_{You need to write 5-8 sentences per paragraph for atotal of 20-32 sentences overall.}

Introduction paragraph 1: The thesis statement is usually the lastsentence of the introductory
paragraph: This paper is going to discuss how Ms. Adelle Duboiswill convince the Saudis
management team to agree to a French and Saudi ballet performanceand contract.
Topic sentence

for paragraph 2: Ms. Adelle Dubois will need to respect thelocal Saudi traditions
when negotiating a contact with the Saudi management team.
Topic sentence

for paragraph 3: To convince the Saudi management team, Ms.Dubois will need to
address the Saudis concern for the French women’s dance attire andwhether the dancers may
include male dancers or not.
Topic sentence

for paragraph 4 (conclusion): In conclusion, the success of Ms.Dubois’s contract
depends greatly upon her intercultural communication and persuasionskills.

Case 1: A French firm, The Paris Opera Ballet, sent itssenior-level manager, Ms. Adelle Dubois, to
opening discussions to negotiate a performance contract with TheTheater of King Fahd Cultural
Center in Riyadh, Saudi Arabia. The discussion will address how thedancers from France will be able
to perform with the Saudi dancers in Saudi Arabia. Briefly, discussthe cultural values of each culture
in a business context. Mention the language used for communicationbetween the two parties.
How will Ms. Dubois convince the Theater of King Fahd to accept heroffer and have both the French
and Saudi dancers perform together?

In the introduction, describe the situation and add a thesisstatement. In the body of the essay,

paragraph 2 discuss how Ms. Dubois will learn about the Saudiculture.

In paragraph 3, discuss how
Ms. Dubois will address the Saudis concerns about the Frenchwomen’s dance attire and whether
the dancers may include men or not. In the conclusion, provide asummary reiterating the
advantages Ms. Dubois may cultivate in order to seal thecontract.