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Analyze the letter. Pinpoint its strengths and weaknesses. What are the organization, content, and style errors? Then revise the letter.

Dear Marsha: We hired you last year on the promise that your company would provide us with a quick response to technical problems. I am pleased to see that your company lived up to its promise. I would like to thank you and your company for your assistance in getting our Internet site operational after lightning struck our building during a recent storm. We appreciate you and your team arriving so quickly and working around the clock to get our system operational. Our business relies heavily on having this site available to our customers to increase our sales. Please communicate our appreciation to your team for their efforts. hank You: In your group, analyze the letter. Pinpoint its strengths and weaknesses. What are the organization, content, and style errors? Then revise the letter. Dear Marsha: We hired you last year on the promise that your company would provide us with a quick response to technical problems. I am pleased to see that your company lived up to its promise. I would like to thank you and your company for your assistance in getting our Internet site operational after lightning struck our building during a recent storm. We appreciate you and your team arriving so quickly and working around the clock to get our system operational. Our business relies heavily on having this site available to our customers to increase our sales. Please communicate our appreciation to your team for their efforts.

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